You Don't Have to be Blonde to be a W***e

 

 

 

It’s hard to keep going

Always a suspicious mind

I wish I could trust you

But I’ve dealt with your kind

Like stepping through quicksand

You drag me so low

It’s time for a confession

I need to know.

I get the feeling that there’s something else that’s going on.

I pray to God that my natural instincts are telling me wrong.

Where did you go?

Why are you late?

Was he better than me

So you skipped out on our date?

Always watching my back

The walls are closing in

Just tell me the truth

And rip my heart from within

I know that you and I are both better than filthy cheaters.

I only hope that in the end I’ll be the one who gets to keep her.

My body’s in pain

Stop playing this games

You are the love of my life.

Reviews

[melancholia skies]

Pshh, god Meredith you didn't have to call me a w***e. e.e; I just remembered when you posted that, I was so pissed at you. XD, Anyways, getting on topic.
Nice work, it expression the emotion vibrantly, and almost richly in a way.
Great write, Shane. :)

[Xfaerie corpseX]

great poem.


i loved it. eeven though it insults blondes lol


if that really happend im sorry she didnt consider how u'd be affected

[dread or dismay.]

... Is that somthing against blondes? .... I'M DAMN BLONDE! D:<

............................ Jee, Thanks...

Andie's here. ... :D And she's a w***e! xD lol... Naws, JJ. She's spazzins at moi at the moment... 0_X ...

[xlynne]

great poem! it was very full of saddness and emotion, i suppose finding out the love of your life is cheating on you must be a real hell to suffer

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

the writing is amazing... great... full of emotion and sadness... you can see it comes from the heart... a broken heart... nicely done

[Akaila]

it was flowing nicely until the last line! i dont know i didnt like that last line! but this poem was still great!!! in my opnion try to fix that last line but if you like it you like it! im just saying! good job though!!
~akaila~