Let The Rain Fall On Me

Let The Rain Fall On Me

A Poem by HimitsuHanabusa

Its raining and i wait for someone to fine me.
Life is this cold as ice touches your skin
All I can do is walk forward and make myself forget my happiness
Why must it rain when someone cries?
Is it easy to smile even though life is drowning you?

I can't hold out anymore
I can't step away
I can't see

This is the only way for me to move forward
but...I still have to force a smile to make it seem everything is alright
I don't want other to help me though I want it
I want to but I am silent
I am afraid

I'm lonely

© 2017 HimitsuHanabusa


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Its raining and i wait for someone to fine me.
Life is this cold as ice touches your skin
All I can do is walk forward and make myself forget my happiness
Why must it rain when someone cries?
IT MUST RAIN WHEN SOMEONE CRIES BECAUSE THE PERSON WITH HEARTBREAK NEEDS A COMPANION.. TO SHARE THE PAIN AND TEARS.
WOW BEAUTIFUL QUESTION.. NICELY WRITTEN PORTION WITH AN ATTRACTIVE LINES.


I can't hold out anymore
I can't step away
I can't see REALISTIC AND RELATABLE LINES AGAIN. WOW ! SUPER LIKE



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Its raining and i wait for someone to fine me.
Life is this cold as ice touches your skin
All I can do is walk forward and make myself forget my happiness
Why must it rain when someone cries?
IT MUST RAIN WHEN SOMEONE CRIES BECAUSE THE PERSON WITH HEARTBREAK NEEDS A COMPANION.. TO SHARE THE PAIN AND TEARS.
WOW BEAUTIFUL QUESTION.. NICELY WRITTEN PORTION WITH AN ATTRACTIVE LINES.


I can't hold out anymore
I can't step away
I can't see REALISTIC AND RELATABLE LINES AGAIN. WOW ! SUPER LIKE



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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