Save her, Save me.

Save her, save me.

She grabs the gun
And holds it tight
She says she’s done
She’ll soon take flight

She writes a letter
Saying goodbye
To her mother
It’s time to die

Before she changes her mind
She pulls the trigger
Hopefully her mother will find
A way to get better

Before I die.

Author's Note

okay so this is my first rhyming poem :P so dont be to harsh okay? Thankies.

Reviews

[Eloise]

it's a little unstructured but then again so are a lot of my poems :D. This poem was deep with some dark views but it was well written. Very good.