I believed it was mine only

I believed it was mine only

A Poem by Yami no Hime
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Poem/rant

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I believed it was all for me

That nobody else had ever heard it

That I was special to recieve it

I guess I was really wrong wasn't I?

I saw it

It was for someone else

You just used it to get into my heart

I hope you're happy

You succeeded

I love you

You obviously don't feel the same

Or I wouldn't get words ment for another girl

One who you really loved

I believed it was mine

And mine only

© 2010 Yami no Hime


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this is heartfelt and emotional...your hurts comes through with every line..well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the pain of betrayal and two-sidedness is a terrible agony and the act of cheating makes it a hard to pass cocktail of despair. I like the way you choose your words into this fine braid of feelings

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful. Don't worry about the format, it actually helps for a poem like this.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Yami no Hime
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I'm young, but I'm mature, I'm naive, but I'm experienced. All I can say is that I am me, I always have been, and I always will be... more..

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A Poem by Yami no Hime