You cruel ruler

Poem rant again

S**t, I trusted you
You had crushed me
Then you lifted me
Now I have given up.
You made me feel amazing
You claimed love
You claimed that you were loyal
You claimed that you wanted me.
You lied to me
Made me crash back down from the height you brought me to
Ruined my life once more.
You bring my tears
You find them funny
You are awful.
I was on top of the world
I thought I was in everyone's thoughts
In reality you just made me think I was by ruling my thoughts
You ruled my will
You made me who I wasn't
You made me a person who I hate
You are simply a cruel ruler, a ruler of the heart and mind.
You brought me down, then up, now back down
Further down then ever, I will never be able to get back up
You ruled me, you misused me, you have ruined me.

Author's Note

Ignore funky format

Reviews

[Paul]

Honestly, I felt sad while reading this. This is remarkable and sad and so powerful. You have a way with words and writing them down. And I hate it when people go through so much harm after a good relationship. I loved this piece of writing, I doubt I should even call it just "a writing" I think it's more of a masterpiece to me. :)

[Ashimoto]

This was a sad poem. I like it though.

[Tea And A Cheshire Smil..]

The emotions in this are really powerful ^^ I even read it through twice. Brilliant write.

[Silent Siren]

I liked this one a lot! I had to read it twice through :)

To me it reflects a relationship gone wrong. The love/betrayal theme is well developed.

But it also talks about that emotional dependence some people develop for their partners, and how it can become a sort of a vicious circle from which sometimes we can't get away because it's too late...