...and I still wait for you

Long gone,but you never left my soul
silent pain ...and I still wait for you,

drowning in the tears of betrayal,i still swim
silent helplessness...and I still wait for you,

slowly learning the art of bluff,i still recognize the real me
silent hopelessness ....and i still wait for you,


thousand deaths in that one moment ,i still breathe
silent storm.....and i still wait for you,

Facing a new battle each day inside me,i still fight
silently giving up.....and i still wait for you,

shattered and broken,i still pick up my pieces
silent sufferings.....and i still wait for you,


looking for something ,i don't know what,i still try to find
silent longings.....and i still wait for you .

Reviews

[stars are far]

that was very sad yet well done.. keep it up

[Hímayun kuræshýe]

thanks ..if the pain keeps up i would like to keep myself up too :)

[stars are far]

tell me about it !

[willweb]

This was beautiful. No matter what is found, still I wait for you. I really enjoyed this today.

[Hímayun kuræshýe]

thanks ..thanks alot ,i really appreciate such a kind gesture ...these are but the feelings n pains that start and end my day !

[willweb]

I believe we both may walk the same path

[Hímayun kuræshýe]

leave ur footprints behind for me to follow ..for i m incapable to lead anymore :)

[Noor.92]

Such a deep, thoughtful yet easily comprehensible write..Liked much..

[Hímayun kuræshýe]

thanks alot ..i appreciate your valuable review and m glad that my feelings and thoughts to some extent could reach out through these words !

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Talking about a soulmate, the word itself says it. Sorrow is a great pain that hurts our soul. Your description and words are very beautiful. Well done.

[Hímayun kuræshýe]

thank you sir...i feel humbled ....hopefully first towards something

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

My pleasure, keep up the good work. :)
Rudi