Thinking Of You

Just thinking you, with my deep heart,
just want to forget you,
with my deep mind
i never take the risk,
for rember you in a weak
i never leave you , because of some true
somepeople think he is nervous

but my life seems as like a circus

sometime i take the ricks

but i never solve my problem,

because of my own tricks

my mind tale just forget him,

and heart tell remember him
i never understand the reasion,

because my life change wallpaper every session.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Himanshu, the poem is sound in concept and imagery...There are just a few grammatical issues that you could address. I am here if you need any further suggestions. Otherwise, it's a beautiful poem on heartbreak and longing for a beloved. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts...Much appreciated!

[Himanshu shekhar]

Thank you very much for reviewing this.And acording to me i don't think the grammer is much needed for expresse you felling.THANK DIVYA FOR YOUR COMPLIMENT.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Himanshu.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your poem is very heartfelt Himanshu :)

[Himanshu shekhar]

Thank you so much vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good flow of words and thoughts. I like the honest and direct feel of the words. Better to set the table with the truth. A strong ending to a interesting poem.
Coyote

[Himanshu shekhar]

Thankyou very much for this nice review.thank you.

[Himanshu shekhar]

Thank you very much for this Appreciation..:-)