Speechless

Speechless

A Poem by Mercy Fae
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How I feel currently about myself.

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Dear self,
Don't you already realize what you are?
Worthless.
Underweight.
Depressed.
Not beautiful enough.
Not good enough. 
Not a good enough friend for those who have left you alone. 
Isolated.
Alone.
Sorrowful.
Sobbing.
Miserable.
True emotions cowardly hide behind a mask.

© 2015 Mercy Fae


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Hopefully this is from the past and not the life you lead now. Everyone has worth and value. Your beautiful words are proof of your value. Thanks,

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mercy Fae

9 Years Ago

I don't see my worth.
Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

The words you have written are reason enough to see your value with the beautiful words you have sha.. read more
Sad. These feelings resonate in thousands of others looking for a light that they just can't find. I hope that through writing you can find that light and not delve deeper into loneliness. A well written work however.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but I can say honest.
Like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good. Now crush all of those worthless thoughts and accept the truth. There's no one better than you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good. Now crush all of those worthless thoughts and accept the truth. There's no one better than you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have read your poem Jennifer and in it I saw a part of myself I used to be. You can see it in "The Letter".

I overcame those dark feelings by making a list of them all - as defined by the dictionary, then stood before a mirror and out loud I accepted each one of them. When I was done I realized that I had empowered myself by taking away peoples power to hurt me.

Try it....and watch a beautiful butterfly come out of her cocoon. Hugs!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Gee
Beauty is far more than what the eye sees.You write beautifully and one day you will be taken and cherished for what you are,and not what you, at this present time think you should be.Take care

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like the closing line of this piece: "True emotions cowardly hide behind a mask."
And here I thought only I was capable of this level of self-loathing haha.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mercy Fae
Mercy Fae

Huntington Beach, CA



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