our twisted fairy tale

We have all heard the fairy tales of princess and their princes and how they all had their own “missions” to go through before they lived happily ever after. Like Cinderella and how her mother and step sisters made her their own slave. How snow white was frowned upon because of her beauty and the queen wanted to be fairest in the land. How sleeping beauty was cursed and fell into a deep sleep. We know how they end. They get their prince and live happily ever after the end. There’s nothing more no after math. Well maybe there should be. Or something should change in the story to make it more like reality but then again it wouldn’t be a fairy tale. It would just be reality. So like little girls like me growing up watching princesses go through hell then in the end finding their love the man to save them from what they once went through. They’re prince saves them. There for us young girls think that when s**t starts to get bad a man just going to walk into our life and save us. Sometimes it does happen in others it doesn’t. When it does happen the guy ends up leaving most the time. Then we are stuck with nothing. I’m not complaining that men just get up in walk out of your life and never talking to you again. I’m just stating that some men aren’t like the men in fairy tales. So girls go they’re lives looking for that one man to spend their happily ever after with. Most women don’t find that one man. They don’t really exist!! There is no perfect man out there. Some writer though thought it would be a great idea to put this fair madam in distress. He would come along and save her and they’d live happily ever after. Then all these girls have false hopes of finding the man of their dreams and it never happens, and so to all you reading this. There is someone out there for you. They just aren’t going to be perfect like you hope. When you find them don’t sit there in judge them for all they got. But love them for who they are. No one is perfect in the truth is neither are you. So deal with it. Love who you have because they love you. Be great full for all that you have, not things you wish you had. Love the person your with. If you don’t love them then why are you with them? You’re not a princess or a prince so things don’t just get to come to you like candy. Take what you have because doubts are if you don’t. They will leave and there are chances that they are never coming back. Don’t be a greedy person, because you aren’t a fairy tale. There isn’t anyone to erase what you’ve already done. This is reality and this is what you make it.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

It's some good wisdom that you express here. No one should ever quit dreaming, but still, they must remember to keep their feet on the ground.

[Viccy Rogers]

This is really emotional! It would be easier to read if you broke it down into paragraphs, and I also noticed a few grammar errors. Other than that it is really good - you have interesting ideas! You could maybe develop them further and make them easier to relate to by giving the reader something to compare to...include some similes and metaphors? I love the name as well:)