Lust, Love and Broken Hearts

This is hella old! i think i wrote it my freshman year! ha!

Love what is this feeling that people talk so highly about? How can you love someone you've never touched? How can you touch someone you've never loved? Lust the feeling of darkness. Diguised by blisfull emotions. Emotion of passion later covered with hurt. Constant drama. Constant pain. Why doesn't anything go the right way. Every guy after every guy. Everytime I feel like this my life spins out of control. This is not working! ~akaila~

Author's Note

old

Reviews

[Troy Baham Jr.]

i already read this on elite. why you told me to read it again?

[Kara Emily Krantz]

hello! hmmm yes i completely understand! the pieces of our integrity that we can give away is incredible!!

i'm glad you're done doing so.

well, until the next one.... ;)

[Scott Eckert]

This is a wonderfully written poem. This poem made me think about the past. Sometimes things feel so good, but they are the wrong. Even though you wrote it about a guy, many people have experienced this, him or her. Thanks for sharing.

[Jazlean]

this is so true, the emotion is there. a peom that almost all girls can relate to. well written, well done.