Vortex

Empty black hole
Spiraling out of control

Where it goes ?
We will never know

Out in the dark and cold
Where the stars gone rogue

We start to fall
This is the end of us all

Reviews

[MyOpenThirdEye]

Looking up at the stars appears to have you thinking of nothing but gloom and doom, The dark sucking void has a certain terrifying beauty though don't you think?

Anyway, it puts the thoughts in your head very clearly.

[Hunter Havoc]

Yes and the reason why people look at up to the stars is because we all know they are absolute and when one dies another will soon take it's place

[MyOpenThirdEye]

Cycle of life kind of stuff I suppose, but one can still enjoy the beauty of a fleeting shimmering star and not just focus on the fact that one day it will burn out.

[Hunter Havoc]

Agreed, I just like to face and embrace the inevitable.

[MyOpenThirdEye]

I can understand that, its realistic
but too much realism can make us into cynical old men ha

[Hunter Havoc]

You don't need to be old to be a cynic XD

[MyOpenThirdEye]

The cynicism is strong with this one
We'll find some sparkly optimism to sprinkle in your oats sometime