The Art In Goodbye

The Art In Goodbye

A Poem by HeyUmmWhat

I vowed never to lose you again,

For the loss of this love will drive me away.

Drive me back to the things I once left,

Drive me to the men that hurt me,

And the tears that would never stop falling.

When we're threw I will be the women I once was.

The one who never cared who would be next to her.

You were the paint to my painting and with out you I am bare.

Now together we can make a masterpiece or just be the end of a broken canvas.

© 2008 HeyUmmWhat


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there are some really nice pieces to this i appreciated alot.
you have a nice way of conveying the story to the reader.
very honest.

kudos and thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


yes you are right. I'm sorry I was typing fast last night. It should be through

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is great and beautiful and true.

there is one typo, "When we're threw I will be the women I once was" wouldn't it be "through" ?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2008