Undefeated

Undefeated

A Poem by Hey.MeAgain.
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"But a man is not made for defeat. A man can be destroyed but not defeated." - Ernest Hemingway

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Undefeated
- Hey.MeAgain.

Tired of fighting
this fate
Tired of pushing against
this current

When can I stop?

Blood
on my knees
Tears
across my face
Wounds
deep within my soul

As I stand back up
and scream in defiance - 
Why?!

© 2010 Hey.MeAgain.


Author's Note

Hey.MeAgain.
I wrote this in .. 2 minutes, so I know it's not edited properly. I am prepared for your harshest critiques (:

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I think that the structure could be adjusted, and maybe there could be some more added to it, but overall, powerful write. Nice job. c:

Coral

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 19, 2010
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Hey.MeAgain.
Hey.MeAgain.

New Zealand



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I fail at about me's, so posting some of the awesome poems I've read here seems like a better idea. - "Oh, how lonely this heart is! Just do this, nothing else: come close, lift my heart's fac.. more..

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