Gone

Fate only gives you one chance, my love.

Gone

- Hey.MeAgain.

Played this role

          A thousand times,

You heard me crying

crying

But you didn't mind.

Chose the road

          that left me behind,

So just keep walking

walking

Until you reach that grave of mine

Author's Note

Still under construction .. what do you think?

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

it is an effective engaging poetic~ perhaps one or two more stanzas between the first and last to flesh out the circumstance a bit more?~ however it stands well enough as it is to relate the happenstance and translate the mood of the piece to the reader~