Forever

Forever

- Hey.MeAgain.

Forever

Is not in those empty words.

Forever 

Is not in those glorious promises.

It is longer

than the stretch of the horizon.

It is stronger

than the blaze of the sun.

And I couldn't help but wonder

where is our forever?

Author's Note

First poem I'd written in an age, was it alright?

Reviews

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. more than alright ... beautifully expressed ... the image of the horizon is outstanding and so is the image of the blaze of the sun ... you are amazing at the language and at sculpting emotions ... keep writing ...

[bbb]

I really enjoyed this short but powerful poem. If this is the first you've written in a long time, I think you did a great job. I would like to see more of your work.

[M Garcia]

It was a great poem. You can feel the honesty, the feelings that are conveyed in this. Keep up the great work. I think it will take you far.

[deeps]

And I couldn't help but wonder
where is our forever?

Amazing poem here, I really enjoyed this.
So much said in such a wonderful little write.