Pickled

Pickled

A Poem by Robert Tusitala O'Neill
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The way some people grow old...

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As he grew old
He coalesced
And began to drink less water

Instead he preferred tea
Wine, beer, or liquor
And his thoughts narrowed

Less opened to the flow of his own development
His character crystallized like a stone
And he became set in his ways

Dryly he disapproved of others' decisions
Inflexibility defined him
And quietly, uncomfortably, he fossilied

© 2014 Robert Tusitala O'Neill


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Woo, this is out of this world, Robby. I have not read you in yonks and for that I am sorry... I've been missing out dearly. Will be over to read more soon!

Out of this world my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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10 Years Ago

I'm super complimented, Noodle! I just had a strange impulse and wrote this one. I think it had to.. read more

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Robert Tusitala O'Neill
Robert Tusitala O'Neill

Alameda, CA



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I'm foolishly romantic. I like realism and surrealism in all different forms of art. I feel that when you can use reality to show your truth, then you have achieved the most powerful form of art pos.. more..

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