CAN'T CONTROL MY HEART

i know it's not one of my best poems

I want to say  this but i don know how
I've been up for days
just thinking about it
but still haven't found a way out


i did what all girls do
and told them all about it
but they all thought i was a fool
and should forget about it

but none of them understand
the pain i feel deep in my heart on thought of forgetting about it
none of them understand how deep my love is
to just forget about it


just because he's a bad boy and am the good girl
doesn't mean i can't love him
and anyways there is no rules in love
and no one can control whom to fall in love with

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Love is blind and we all fall for the bad boy at least once in our life :P Very well expressed. Thank you for sharing.

[Hessy]

thank you very much

[B.J]

Understanding the pain of romance. Great work

[Hessy]

thanks a lot

[B.J]

you're welcome

[Hessy]

thanks that means a lot..........................

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very strong and nice piece . i like last stanza it s very true and powerfull.