LEAVE ME ALONE

YOU SAID YOU LOVED ME
BUT THEN YOU LEFT ME
YOU SAID YOU CARED
BUT THEN YOU MADE ME CRY
YOU PROPOSED TO ME
BUT WENT AND MARRIED ANOTHER

I GOT ANOTHER ONE
YOU MADE HIM RAN AWAY
TARNISHED MY REPUTATION
AS IF AM YOURS

BEING HATED BY EVERYONE
AND EVIL BEING CALLED EVERY TIME
LOSING ALL MY FRIENDS AT ONCE
AND A LONER I BECAME

YOU DON'T LOVE ME
BUT YOU NEVER LET ME LOVE
YOU DON'T CARE
AND YOU NEVER LET ANYONE DO FOR ME
YOU RUINED MY PROPOSALS
BY RUSHING MY  SUITORS AWAY

IN CASE YOU FORGOT
AM ONLY JUST  A GIRL
WHO DESPERATELY NEEDS A COMPANION
AND IN MY LIST
AM SURE YOU ARE NOT INCLUDED
AND WHAT DO I WANT?
''LEAVE ME ALONE''

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

That sure did pack a punch. Good job.
You know how to write with emotion, I give you that.

-Maria

[Hessy]

thanks..........

[Rose Diamond]

Wow! Such strong emotions and anger! Hell, I was even scared for a second! :P

You did a wonderful job at expressing this emotion, and with the exception of a few minor spelling/grammar errors, it was perfect. Great job! :)