SUICIDE NOTE

                

 DEAR MOTHER,
     AM TIRED
    TIRED OF LYING TO MYSELF
    THAT EVERYTHING'S OK
    WHEN I KNOW IT'S FAR FROM THAT

    I'VE HAD ENOUGH
    ENOUGH OF RAZORS
    CARRASSING MY SKIN
   WHENEVER AM IN PAIN

   I THINK IT'S TIME
   TIME TO SAY GOODBYE
   TO YOU,TO THE WORLD AND EVERYONE I KNOW

    WHEN READING THIS
    JUST KEEP ONE THING IN MIND
    ALTHOUGH YOU WERE THE REASON FOR ALL MY PAIN
 
   I NEVER BLAMED YOU
   BUT MYSELF FOR BEING IGNORANT
   AND COMING TO THIS WORLD ALTHOUGH YOU NEVER WANTED ME TO
   AND ALL I CAN SAY RIGHT NOW IS SORRY AND BYE

Reviews

[Hessy]

thanks.it's doesn't relate anything in my life it just came into my mind..

[...]

sounds too realistic . i hope you are okay. your words are like sharp blade razor inside the soft skin.

[Emily]

I like you wording! Well done.
~Emily

[Hessy]

thanks that means a lot to me

[wordman]

but remember when you pull the trigger it`s us that will remember

[Kasey Miriam]

This is a highly painful piece that brings back so much from my own life experiances. I lost one friend, and saved another. Very touching and well written

[Hessy]

thnksssssssss

[Neira.B]

Wow ! so powerful I imagined as if I was the mother reading this and tears just came rushing to my eyes . Wonderful work

[Hessy]

thanks that means a lot

[Ephixious]

A bit choppy towards the end, but overall, It was pretty good!

[E.Potter]

The pain in this is palpable. I don't know how personal it is, but I just want to say that I hope you're ok.

[Hessy]

thanks and am k

[A. Amos]

Speechless don't know what to say or write........

[B.J]

A very intimate personal piece..