Before you become dust.

Before you become dust.

A Poem by Hesham Elwakeel
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Just a random thought about life i had, And i wrote about it.

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Live with passion as you love with lust, 
Enjoy your life before you become dust! 
Feel the power of your brain
Dont waste you life in a useless vain
Feel the power of that emotion 
Like the legacy of sharks in an endless ocean
Vain means nothing, lover means much
Feel the lust in love, with a single touch 
You might miss the train once, twice, Dont even care!! 
Life is long! Life is a big deal affair
You care for a person who doesn't care about you? Watch your back! 
So you're expecting a needle in a haystack? 
Once you'll love someone who will love you forever
You both might not be ideal, but you are perfect TOGETHER
Life is like a hard job, If you nailed it you'll be a king, 
Love the job more than a woman who loves a diamond ring
You're obsessed with all that wealthy things? 
WAKE UP! Life is sending you some pings! 
You'll never have it all, though you'll have enough 
Don't get tricked by that life, Trust me, That's all a bluff! 
Just wake up, man up, do something different
Life is too short to care about, too long to get bored of!
HAVE THAT PASSION!! REMEMBER THAT LUST! 
before my dear, you become dust!

© 2013 Hesham Elwakeel


Author's Note

Hesham Elwakeel
Im just 16 years old, Don't judge me if it's bad or you didn't like it but i accept all opinions:D

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Prolific,... You wrote this line with deep perspicacity
"Love the job more than a woman who loves a diamond ring".
And the last 2 lines were the crafts-work of a true poet, just like you. REMARKABLE.
Don't forget that flow to engender a glow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"Just wake up, man up, do something different
Life is too short to care about, too long to get bored of!
HAVE THAT PASSION!! REMEMBER THAT LUST!
before my dear, you become dust!"
I like the strength and the logic of your words. I agree with the above lines. I tell people. hard times create strong people. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Hesham Elwakeel
Hesham Elwakeel

Cairo, Egypt