Midnight

One second in which time stands still

One second in which nothing is real

In this one second i am free

In this one second there is no one,but me

For one second i am pain-free

For one second i am me.

Author's Note

short,smiple, and sweet.who needs a long pome to express their feelings?not me.

Reviews

[Perry]

I live for those moments and I really appreciate this topic and the fact you thought to capture that in poem form. Very inspiring and I'm glad I read it, thanks for sharing!

[Surrealstorm]

Sometimes the shortest poems are the best! excellent write!

[Hyori]

This is really good. And you're right, you don't need a giant poem to express what you want. Great job!

[C.B.]

Very nice, a lot written into a little. Good job

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an amazing poem! I loved it! Although it wasn't the longest of poems, it was fantastic, and really showed a lot of emotion! It was very well written and I really enjoyed reading it! :D