An Early Midnight

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A night out of many,

The whispers dare to sing.

A man without a penny,

And a lover who can’t be seen.

 

A leaf taunted by decay,

And its children growing old.

The tree follows by day,

Yet by night its story fully told.

Reviews

[leesa331]

I enjoyed this. I reread several times thinking of the meaning and I love work that makes me contemplate the authors feelings as they write. I especially like the line about "A leaf taunted by decay,
And its children growing old" It is original and interesting

[Hernan de la Mancha]

Thanks for the kind words!