Samhain

Samhain

A Poem by Shreya
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A poem I wrote on the eve of Samhain, our newyear, this 2013. PS. Samhain is what the normal people call "Halloween" It's a tribute to all the good spirits protecting us and helping us all around.

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I stare out the window

Mist everywhere,

Are they approaching?

The leaves are turning cold

The trees are humming the names

I feel myself getting erased in this exotic feeling

The wind blows

So cold,

The stars blink, just like I blink my eyes,

I see the long forgotten sight

The sea, the mountains, the forest,

Getting smudged inside the mist all at once

And as I've known,

The veil was getting thinner every second,

I finally smile,

Knowing the veil is gone.

They have came.

It's their time.



© 2013 Shreya


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Brilliant imagery and great transitions!
I feel like I went on a journey and saw all those images!

The poem is about a person that has an extra sensory skill and is able to pay attention to what most persons disregard. The character in the poem describes how voices carried by the wind announce the arrival of the once lived.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RealistMe

10 Years Ago

Oh okay. I'm glad to have helped. :)
Shreya

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
RealistMe

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.



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"The veil was getting thinner every second,

I finally smile,

Knowing the veil is gone." I like the veil imagery. Time to go at the end... Just enough to keep the reader guessing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh yay. I do love Samhain. Very nice and chilly way of describing it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shreya

10 Years Ago

Oh, I love it too! Shame on the people in here that they don't celebrate it.. And thank you so much... read more
It took me to another place. I loved the description of the surroundings. Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shreya

10 Years Ago

Awww, thank you so much. :) xx
This is lovely..I like its simple unfolding..very well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shreya

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much. xx
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Brilliant imagination.
Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shreya

10 Years Ago

Thank you. xx
Lovely work.
I felt the events myself from your nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


zainul

10 Years Ago

Welcome.
Tumi review-er shundor jobab dieso.
Khub khushi hoesi.
Banglai likheso ki.. read more
Shreya

10 Years Ago

Ekta likhechilam, tobe besi likhte pari na. besi words ase na mathay. :) Kono ek time e post korbo o.. read more
zainul

10 Years Ago

Dhonnyobad.
Omon-e hoe.
Jotno kore ota rekhe dao are engreji-bangla ja-e isse kore ta-e.. read more
I like it, well done!
i have some editorial ideas , just little things; everyone would have things their own way lol!

Samhain
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Staring out of the window
everywhere mist,
...are they approaching?
trees are humming the names,
their leaves growing cold,
myself I feel becoming erased through such exotic feeling,
the wind moves so cold,
the stars blinking, my eyes blink,
seeing long forgotten sights-
the sea, the mountains, the forest,
feeling smudged inside the mist all at once,
and as I've known,
the veil now thinner every moment,
finally I smile
knowing the veil is gone.
They have come.
It is their time.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shreya

10 Years Ago

Adam, thank you so much for editing this properly. This is beautiful, and I am now going to put this.. read more
I think there's just a few grammar issues,
The trees are gumming the names- might sound better ifnit was, their name.
Then towards the end, they have came- should be they have come.
Still, i like the journey and if you just allow yourself to be a bit more raw, it will be even better. Keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shreya

10 Years Ago

Inda, I would be very very honest on this, but when I read the humming line with my words and then y.. read more
Inda

10 Years Ago

I'm sure you will, keep it up! :)
Shreya

10 Years Ago

:) Thank you for having faith. :)
what a truly vivid poem i can feel the wind blowing and see the trees moving and that is what good writing is supposed to do make you feel what the words are saying.Great write:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shreya

10 Years Ago

Hello Vidya, thank you. :) I really appreciate your comments. :) xx
Your observant and poetic nature surely complement each other. I applaud your descriptive piece, as it feels like I have seen what you have seen, and heard what you have heard.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shreya

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review and the kind words, Angel.

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Added on November 25, 2013
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Shreya
Shreya

Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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Hi! My name is Shreya, I am 16, from India. I love writing, and reading. They are my favorite things. I am a Wiccan, so I write a lot about the Magick World, and poems about Magick. I write about in o.. more..


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