The Song Without a Title, The River That Doesn't Flow

It all begin so long ago. 
A girl fell in love and gave her heart away.
Memories were made and words were said.
Hearts were broken.
Love was lost.
Every night she sits around staring blankly at everything she's ever known.
She wonders.
Thoughts fly across her vision so fast its impossible to catch every last one of them.
Some things will be for ever lost 
Others will be found
She wonders.
What did I do?
Where did I go wrong?
I gave it all I had I said the words I swore never to speak again.
I gave it away only to get it thrown right back in my face.
She fell in love and that fell apart
There was a story 
And now there is only a blank page with no title
It was unlike any other
And she stills wonders
Was it ever what you thought
Was it ever anything more than words
Meaningless 
Unspoken
Left behind
Hated 
Betrayed 
Forsaken 
Missed 
Loved
She makes her wishes on stars and dandelions
Hoping one day you'll come back to her
But for now
She doesn't want the memories
She doesn't want the words
She doesn't want the wishes
She doesn't want your love
She want's things back to normal
She want's it back without the heartbreak
She want's her veins to pump red
Everything she want's and everything she needs is waiting unseen out by the river that doesn't flow.

Reviews

[Sujash I. Purna]

She makes her wishes on stars and dandelions...the loveliest line! A naturalness in the flow, a swift subtlety in the end. This is a beautiful and a promising piece! Keep it up!