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As I lose friends and as I shed tears,
As I walk life and I gain years,
I see through the good and I look past the bad,
I look into the future then see what all I’ve had.,
Is there a purpose that’s all I ask of me,
Is there a reason if so I cannot see,

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

The begging of this poem was very interesting and well written. But more towards the end I felt that it fell apart. I don't exactly know why. But good job overall, I suppose.