Unsolid ground

Unsolid ground

A Poem by Helrac

 

I could let myself spend forever

waiting for you.

For that one more thing,

that little bit more.

This hope is not so strong

as it is stubborn.

Deep roots, buried

under all that past and present.

They ache and groan

reaching a little further

giving a little more

grasping for a foundation.

They shudder,

a protest of this shaky earth.

 

© 2012 Helrac


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

When the ground become shaky. We can escape to the right or wrong places. I like the desire and the way you ended this poem. Type of poem to make me think. Goal of a writer. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

249 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on February 7, 2012
Last Updated on February 8, 2012

Author

Helrac
Helrac

About
I didn't intend on writing poetry. I set down to journal one day and this was how my thoughts came out. This seems to be the only way they come out which at times is really frustrating. Not sure what .. more..

Writing
On Empty On Empty

A Poem by Helrac


Clearcut Clearcut

A Poem by Helrac