Battle Field.

The majestic breeze rides through the trees

The lake near be with a color that was fake

It reminded me of a song

One that ran through my head all along

How not could Man 

Stop, to admire this land

For beyond the scene

Was a far bigger theme

A scene filled with strength

Kept me strong a great length

Not only my fears vanished

But also my demons banished

This paradise I call far from home

But surely a temple for the alone. 

Author's Note

Well, there is this

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

We're never alone. I've seen so many things, and I'm not one to fear, and no matter how used to it I am, I swear these things were never meant to be part of this world. They exist, and border every dimension.

However I believe that I'm merely commenting on the last part of your poem. My ideas of good and evil are upside down, and you'll have to forgive me.


So this poem, I like the first two lines tremendously. It starts strong, and finishes strong too. An excellent piece of work. Great job :)

[Helpmegetbetter]

Every one has their own perception and opinion of things :)
But thank you, this is one of my favorite pieces that I've written :D