Our Song.

bad breakup......great poem

As Our Song Comes On,

I Come To A Sad Truth,

You left,

And I Miss You.

I Listen To What We Used To Share,

Back When You Still Cared.

The Beat What I Used To Find Perfect,

And I Remembered How You Loved It.

The Lyrics Blaring In My Ears,

Bringing Out My Tears.

The Melody, Still I Find Soothing,

Makes Me Think Of You.

The Rhymes Real And True,

The Lyrics My Cure, Forever Pure.

And Even Though I Know You're Gone,

This Is & Forever Will Be Our Song.

Reviews

[Ardra]

Sometimes love feels like a curse.... like a doomsday sentence waiting to happen

Writing helps....a lot...I hope you find some peace in your own words...

[Help_Me]

i hope so too...

[Ardra]

don't worry .... heart breaks feels like end of world... but its not ...
world is beautiful and we are too precious to lose faith in life... .. sending you peace... and some boxes of happiness...pls. smile.. n stay strong..

[Help_Me]

will try my best

[Final-Karma]

This is such a strong poem as I know what it is like for this moment to happen. The music itself is a testament to the feelings you felt. Thank you for sharing your mind.

[Help_Me]

Thanks for the review, and I'll try my best to keep on sharing my mind. :)