The End

I slit My wrist

Once again

Only this time

It will be

The end

 

I don’t know how

I don’t know why

But like I said before 

I say goodbye

If this is all

Then this is it

I can’t keep fighting

To the death

 

Author's Note

Ok, Yes i feel this way... yes i want to die (sometimes) but I swear to you all that I am will not kill myself. I might smoke, I might drink, Hell I might even cut, but I wont kill myself

Reviews

[Kai Rollins]

You write well my friend...I hope you won't let that go..

[Penny]

"Sweetest melodies are those of sadness" :- said Shelly. Your poem truly describes it. Very very emotional. Thanks for sharing b!tchgirl

[Prime]

This is suicidal, but I hope this doesn't reflect what you do. Haha. Great piece of writing expressed by emotions. =D

[Saddam]

I say goodbye
If this is all
Then this is it
I can’t keep fighting
To the death.

Everybody think this is end but why not they understand this a begining for a second journey. It includes all your good or bad results which may be work as you guide.
It is very ultimate touching poetry and seduced us to think about our next journey.

[Saddam]

I say goodbye
If this is all
Then this is it
I can’t keep fighting
To the death.

Everybody think this is end but why not they understand this a begining for a second journey. It includes all your good or bad results which may be work as you guide.
It is very ultimate touching poetry and seduced us to think about our next journey.

[Honey-Bee]

Well, I understand that some people feel this way and to be able to express this in words and captures the emotions of despair can be very necessary. I do hope you don't really feel this way, but if you do their is always help line to call first. Thanks for sharing and let us know!

[Tai Ryens]

Direct and rather expressive, not to mention that it flows nicely and I could feel the squirming tension of grief leaking through every line.

I know the grief. I know how every day is another difficult war to fight in which your enemy is slowly triumphing, and I assure you, they can be surpassed. Life is one of the most difficult and heartless thing any human being has to endure, but I assure you once more, it's worth it.
Stay strong and well done.

[Jack Kennedy]

I hope this not what you're really doing. I like the poem, it's short and direct. I like that

[HelpMe]

no, its not what I'm doing right now... just what I want to be doing

Also thank you :) I'm glad you like it

[Chris]

H'llo... Taylor, life happens and sometimes dealing seems so far out of a person's reach that there seems no point to it. Perhaps way more have "been there" than people credit - but, sometimes it is just that we need a hand to touch and and ear that WANTS to listen. You come by anytime... and talk through it - ya hear?

[HelpMe]

Thank you :)