I love this! I just saw you as an online reader and thought I'd let you know that you've got talent. This is great, just let it keep flowing from your mind into your pen and you could really add to this piece :)
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The first line is very good; I enjoy the verb "slapping".
Play more with the "pneumatic" title. How does the use of wind energy dispel or obscure truths?
I admire the simplicity of the answering lines, and the big questions seem appropriate in contrast to the physical impetus. However, the line "everything is so unclear" feels like it be a little more crafted, as it currently seems a little too general.
Otherwise, beautiful phrasing, especially in the first two lines.
My name is Elle, or Eli. Whichever you prefer.
I am a sixteen year old girl who dreams to become a journalist one day.
I play guitar, and I recently bought myself a beautiful Yamaha APX 500!
I writ.. more..