Frozen Hearts

Frozen Hearts

A Poem by hoffstetter
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Everyone's journey in life is a cold one.

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We all have justifications for the things that we do. 
I know this lion that will give many to you.

His son, the goat, tries to understand his cloudy views.
He has painted pictures with different colors and hues.

He tries to capture emotion. 
He stares at these pictures for hours without motion. 

Breathing slowly, trying to figure them out.
He's read many books, but nothing can tell what this is about. 

A year later he understands the reason for many things that are coming to light.
He's trying to fight this ever raging war, with every bit his might.

Forced to stand on the outside looking in.
Left to fend for himself and endure the ice cold winds.

He's not fully sure how long he has to stay here.
Not even sure if an exit from tis icy world is near. 

It's not too long before his heart and emotions match the climate around him
His cup remains half-full or half-empty, never full and seeping over the brim.

He has learned to survive by thinking with his head.
He'll sleep when he's dead, so there's no need for a bed.

© 2012 hoffstetter


Author's Note

hoffstetter
ignore the grammar. please.

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This is my favorite poem of yours :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me of myself in a way... The ending was very touching and well written too. Great job, and kudos to you.

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved reading this, its one of my favorites for the day (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Somehow I'm in love with the last two lines....!! Good job:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely loved the last line! This was really, really good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. I love the way you portrayed some confusion while also seeming totally confident and sure of your self. Excellent write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this. It was amazing. The whole poem is encased in, like, a shroud (oh how I love that word) of beauty. It really makes you think. And the rhymes are really good too. Awesome job! :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LANCE!!! You gorgeous mofo! This was damn beautiful. Like no joke, this was really good. Love yuhhhhhhh

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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the place where Kurt Cobain was born , WA



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hey all you beautiful people. my full name is gregory lance hoffstetter, but i prefer lance. i'm sixteen years old.... ummmm.. my fave bands are like the stars and pierce the veil. right now, i'm sing.. more..

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