Simple.

Soft tip toes echoe in my mind

They leave foot prints and smoke rings behind.

They cast a dark auro around the house.

With bitter harps and black masked windows.

Calming, calming, calm

There is silence.

As mother earth chokes on the atmosphere.

Death comes with out a warning.

Leave nothing behind but the corpse of your

Long lost mother.

Reviews

[Lusus Naturae]

I liked the sequence towards the beginning, however the last line, "long lost mother", was a little questionable. Perhaps lengthen it? I revel the first two lines most of all, and yes it is quite simple, yet complex within the same small span.