Without You

Romance

 

My heart will go on beating When sweet blossoms bloom  Butterflies announce in flight  renewal is only fleeting. Warmed with rays of summer’s fire Stoked by the heat of your love Lazy days and sunsets gaze upon Our soul's desires.  My heart will go on beating when Autumn’s colors softly fall Nature knows the seasons and the reasons whylove stories sometimes end. Weathering winter’s bitter snow While safely cradled in your arms We recite poems aloudIn our cosy chateau. But if you turn around and walk away And your love should cease Then I could not guarantee my loveMy heart would last another day. ~~~     (c) Helen M Crutchett (All rights reserved) 2009

Author's Note

Thank you for reading my words!

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

An absolutely beautiful piece! Love does have its seaons, and those who weather through the changes will be greatly rewarded for having experienced such a wonder. Your words and descriptions are perfect, such a lovely write.

Thanks to Emma joy for referring this piece.

[Miss Sharon]

( My heart will go on beating when Autumn’s colors softly fall Nature knows the seasons and the reasons why love stories sometimes end.) Wow! This is so beautiful. ~Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

The four seasons of love, beautifully penned. Hoping that love is ever spring and summer. Winter love and the fear of loss is too difficult to contemplate. Living without the love of your other half, too tragic by far.

Chris

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you kindly Christine for your review. Love and light ~ Helena ~

[Zahra]

To feel the frost set in
Heralding winter’s bitter snow
While safe and cradled in your arms
We read our poems aloud

beautifully romantic and peaceful. enjoyed reading it.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

What a beautiful poem of love, through the seasons of a lifetime. So often, couples who have lived and loved a lifetime together, can't bear to live life alone. When one passes on, the other follows within months. Thank you, Helena!

[Cathy Wattam]

A beautiful poem, written with compassion and I loved the ending. Superb!

[Coyote Poetry]

The old heart can be broke. I like the story in your poem and the very true ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[emmajoy]

So many more should read your words because, once read they stay a while and make one smile. So beautifully threaded, Helena.. love deep, love meant, love in its obvious commitment. ' and ~ Nature knows the seasons and the reasons why' .. .. and yes, it does.. and Nature is what makes the heart tick and tick and ..