The Broken Violin

The Broken Violin

A Poem by Helen Crutchett

 

 

 

 

 

 






















The Broken Violin 

 

Morning returns me

from deep slumber

awakening from dreaming

the same thoughts turning 

somehow I lost the way


along life's winding paths

always searching

longing for a song to call my

own sweet air

tattered tunes with no lyrics


drums with no drummer

violins with broken bows

angels dimming starlight 

muting a heavenly choir

I stir and swallow this  bitter 

taste of this pretending life ~

 

 







 

 

 

(c) Helen M. Crutchett 2008 (All rights reserved)


© 2020 Helen Crutchett


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Helen Crutchett
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"The Broken violin"
Helen Margaret Crutchett,
Just as a violin must have just the right tension to play the violin strings;
your poem is showing what happens when our life strings do not possess this needed tension.
A balance of both the bow and strings is so important. Life is like that.
"Longing for a song to call
my own sweet air
tattered tunes with no lyrics
drums with no drummers
violins with broken bows
angels dim the starlight"
I have a violin which i enjoy now and then. I know that practice is really important.
Life is like that too. We must practice Godly and positive life experiences.
Sometimes it is hit and miss but practice makes perfect......in the process.
Blessings,
Kathy




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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helen Crutchett

6 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading and reviewing....much appreciated. Helen x



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"The Broken violin"
Helen Margaret Crutchett,
Just as a violin must have just the right tension to play the violin strings;
your poem is showing what happens when our life strings do not possess this needed tension.
A balance of both the bow and strings is so important. Life is like that.
"Longing for a song to call
my own sweet air
tattered tunes with no lyrics
drums with no drummers
violins with broken bows
angels dim the starlight"
I have a violin which i enjoy now and then. I know that practice is really important.
Life is like that too. We must practice Godly and positive life experiences.
Sometimes it is hit and miss but practice makes perfect......in the process.
Blessings,
Kathy




This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helen Crutchett

6 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading and reviewing....much appreciated. Helen x
One of your best. I hope broken violins can be mended or repaired to emit life's sounds of joy and hope.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poignant write....a case of "is that all there is?" I think as we grow older, there is much reflection. Truth is, life is pretty good even when it is bad. Think about it. Your words are beautifully emotive. Lydi**

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helen Crutchett

9 Years Ago

Many thanks Lydi* for dropping by and leaving your kind heart prints behind on this poem!
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a broken violin,a loss for poetry ,but the music must go on

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helen Crutchett

9 Years Ago

wordman,

Many thanks for your thoughts on this piece.
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome
So very evocative! Your words, silken strands of a soul sore-stressed, entrap the essence of joy repressed.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is wonderful and the ending is perfect.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes we hear music that's lost its timing, repeats itself, jars the ears - just like life when so little makes sense. How i wish you could find a beautiful symphony to wrap around that aching heart ..

' .. longing for a song to call my own sweet air ..' more than one meaning in those words.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A amazing poem and artwork. When we are broke in life or love. Can be like a Broken Violin. Your words gave life and strength to the artwork. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*Perfect* I loved your words, " violins with broken bows
angels dim the starlight void of a heavenly choir" Love the darkness in your poem.... great work Helena.

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