Sweet Breeze

Sweet Breeze 

 

 

Whisper to me some poem

penned by my poet's gentle hand

his lyrics forming the very page of

sonnets sentimental song

 

I hang on every lyric of love 

of passion’s wanton way

dipped in dewy tears of dawn

a day in June welcomes

the daffodils dainty sway

beneath blossom’s heavy bough 

sweep across the ocean his kisses

from lips whence he touched

my soul with lilting prose

penned under moon light's sweet repose

 

do not blow his candle I hold

in my heart with shallow

breath just now I pray

forsake me not my sweet

messenger

 

have mercy in your fanciful flight

to see this woman's fainting heart

to hear her poet’s words of

undying love

 

brush the air with

mignon metaphors

spectacular stanzas

alliterations

 

paint me a picture

a vision sublime

where he doth sit in

complete composure

and sure that he is mine ~

 

 

 

 

© Helen M. Crutchett (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[J3ssInJupit3r]

Soo first of all, I absolutely love your sensory detail. I love the line "dipped in dewy tears of dawn" alliteration at it's finest. There are many words that I do not even know (my vocabulary is not quite that advanced yet) but the way it was used and the way that you put it made it some how easy to understand and read. Again I really loved this poem and it went well with your picture.

[andrew mitchell]

This poem reminded me so much of Robert Burns. I think the picture lead me to this conclusion. A lovely write and painting!

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you Andrew!