Will You Dance With Me?

 

 

 

 

Will You Dance With Me?

 

Will you waltz with me in moist midnight air...

Take my hand to the strains of violins' 

Without a care?

Our newly discovered fragrant rose garden of Secret delights...

Kissed by moon's bright shining light

Enchanted by the calling of deep 

Mystical sounds

At last I've found

Look deep into my eyes as you embrace

my waist so tight...

On a magical carpet ride

This enchanting night

When our dance is through, my dear

Our hearts entwined together its clear....

As we sit at the feet of Eros' enthralling shrine

Our love will out-dazzle the brightest star's shine ~

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem dear Poet. The dance bring two people together create perfect movement.
"When our dance is through my dear
Our hearts will be entwined together its clear"
I agree with the above lines. Dance allow two people to find a understanding for a moment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Helen Crutchett]

Hello beautiful friend. I have sure missed everyone here after a very long time away. Thank you so much for your kind review of this poem. I am so glad you liked it :)

Helena :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy dear Helena and you are welcome.

[andrew mitchell]

What a lovely dance request Helena to me , it must be me! I'm just in the process of asking my wife her permission however it doesn't look good!!! We shall dance to this delightful write that I enjoyed. But its Definitely NO! NO! NO! from her and I can't phone a friend or ask the audience! LOL But in my thoughts we danced:) I won't tell her ! lol

[Helen Crutchett]

LOL.....yes, I enjoyed our dance!!!.....but it's midnight (not really) and I have to run....oops there goes my glass slipper!

Thank you kind sir, you waltz divinely! ;)

[alf]

Hi Helena. I've got to say your title drew me like a magnet, I had had no resistance. As an ex ballroom dancer, your poem reads like a waltz. Violins demanding response, mind playing with the twirls and swirl of sub-melodies while feet move . . . gliding through the garden, so alive with fragrance and starlight. This is the picture you have drawn for me. So undeniably romantic and dreamy, and where better to end?
Loved it, alf

[Helen Crutchett]

Dear alf,

I have edited this poem since you reviewed I think. Stuffed it up, hope it reads ok now. (I had two of this poem on there with different fonts....did you notice? LOL

Cheers and thank you so much for your lovely review. A ballroom dancer? Wow, lucky you!

Helena :)

[alf]

Hi Helena. I did yes, but format is a poets concern. Me? I stick with what magic flows onto the page, But! Having said that, I do like the new format. Its like that first stanza now melds together and draws out the following thoughts, giving more anticipation. Though . . . there was something about the pink . . .

[Helen Crutchett]

hmmm, I may put the pink back on there LOL ;)

[alf]

Hi Helena I like

[Helen Crutchett]

Good, just for you!! :)