You Stepped Out Of My Dream

CHAUCERIAN RONDEL

 

 

You Stepped Out Of My Dreams

 

You stepped out of my dreams

Into the waiting dawning

waking to suns beaming

 

There was a twinkling gleam               

Doves happily winging

On silk clouds redeeming

 

 Rainbows fresh shower stream

Of all blessings bringing

Angels white appearing

You stepped out of my dream ~

 

 

 (c) Helen Margaret Crutchett (all rights reserved)

 
 

 

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

Hats off to your imagination. You have painted the image of a utopia, wonderfully with words. WHen I read you title, this sparked in my mind:-

I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams. "


Sorry for digressing! Thanks for sharing this.

Regards from the very core of heart,
Devanshu

[alf]

Hi Helena. Oh to have someone step from a dream . . . and have them enter the real world. Such are the dreams we long to have. Your canvas has painted me a picture a serenity, lethargy, and the epitome of supreme bliss. Wonderful imagery, alf

[Jamestown]

So beautiful! The imagery of angles dancing in my head:)
Great flowing and touching sentiment, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!