Timepiece ~ Cinquain

 

 

Clock

Counting minutes

Ticking life away

Waiting for no man

Timepiece

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it doesn't wait, and we can't keep trying to catch up to it.

we need to absorb each minute in the best way we can.

tick tick tick.

[angelina neves]

Uau! Lovely!

[zainul]

Congratulations,Helena!!!
My morning has been graced by your winning piece.

[Helen Crutchett]

So kind of you to read this and leave your kind heart prints behind.

Helena :)

[zainul]

Thank you Helena for the lovely words.
I regret for not reviewing the amazing gems created by you for our recreation.
Zainul :)

[Androglossia]

An economy of words that delivers actuality. I admire the brevity of this write. Very well thought out.

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it!

Helena :)

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome, Helena.

[Marie]

Lovely verse...

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you so much Marie.

[Norma M Sutton]

Love it :) Especially the fourth line :)

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you Norma! I actually won a little prize for this in a literary magazine, much to my surprise!