Heart, we will forget him

Heart, we will forget him

A Poem by Helen Crutchett

GLOSA

Heart, we will forget him!
You and I, tonight!
You may forget the warmth he gave,
I will forget the light.
 

By Emily Dickenson

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Heart, we will forget him

With all the power of our might

A sorry tale that we could forever write

If I did not feel so trite!

 

You and I, tonight,

Will remember precious love

The cooing of the gentle dove

The interlude of symphonies song...

 

You may forget the warmth he gave

I will remember the warm barmy nights

sweet blush of a rising moon

His sonnets making me swoon...

 

 

I will forget the light

You can remember the flame

I have forgotten now that the candles dimmed

and I'm left alone without my poet's love...

 

 

 

 

© Helena 2012

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Helen Crutchett


Author's Note

Helen Crutchett
Written in GLOSA form, inspired from a poem of Emily Dickinson.


Thank you for reading my words poets!

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Helena!
You have taken the words of Emily Dickinson and skillfully added more depth and emotion to them in a way that causes my heart so sing!
'Tis lovely, so very lovely!! The feeling of sadness and longing transcends moments of time. I can see the dimmed candles, sense the warmth turned to cold, but grasp the love that is still alive!!

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Beautiful...Emily Dickenson would be honored...

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Helena!
You have taken the words of Emily Dickinson and skillfully added more depth and emotion to them in a way that causes my heart so sing!
'Tis lovely, so very lovely!! The feeling of sadness and longing transcends moments of time. I can see the dimmed candles, sense the warmth turned to cold, but grasp the love that is still alive!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great write by Emily. Thank U Helena for sharing the same.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this! Emily is a favorite of mine........Nice job!

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Helen Crutchett

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much Eileen for stopping by and leaving your kind heartprints behind!

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Added on July 16, 2012
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