Not this time

Not this time

A Poem by HelenZ
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a joke again)

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You’re hot- wow! You ‘re hot!
Everybody wants you - so what?
You touch my hips with your eyes-
But all your promises  -lies!

You say- I’m the only queen.
I know- I’ve always been!
But I can tell you one thing - 
My dear, you are not my King!


© 2019 HelenZ


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A "story" 'tween the lines... good 'tude.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely how play this is, and all too familiar for all too many!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like an encounter with one of God's gift to women. Testosterone can be a terrible thing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is fun - this is funny - this is fantastic! and the best part is that it works throughout!! No mistakes here. Musicality is on point, it's short and snappy, and the last line just hits it over the park. Well done! Much enjoyed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HelenZ

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and reviews! )) It gives me more confidence) THANK YOU!
emipoemi

5 Years Ago

my pleasure.

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Added on February 1, 2019
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Tags: #joke #love #notthistime #funny

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HelenZ
HelenZ

Saint-Petersburg



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