About a drop

A small fairy tale written by me and translated into English by my student.

A Drop really wanted to have a name. She was an average water substance like millions of other nameless drops. Nobody wondered where drops come from and where they have gone. Just to be was enough. Curious Drop wanted to distinguish herself and therefore she shaped herself in many ways. She reflected the sun, or carved leaf of weed, or coloured fishtail, and it seemed to her that she was absolutely different from other drops. The Drop lived in the sea, sometimes she soared up into the sky, hovered for some time within a cloud, and then rushed homeward in a rain.
The Drop had quite a calm and settled life, but it seemed to her that she could do more. She wanted to have a name. She heard that everything distinguishing has a name. She wanted to distinguish. She didn’t know why, what for, but she dreamt of being something else….
One day, when she was doing her luxuriant fringe in a downy cloud, she talked to the Wind. The Drop shared her dreams and lamented over her dissatisfaction of drops’ simple daily routine. The Wind sniffed, bending accidentally all the trees around, and said, “Yes, there is another way.” And he brought the Drop to the land. Soon it rained, Drop’s luxuriant fringe got wet, and the Drop found herself in a puddle. 
In the end the Wind said strange words, “It’s only the beginning of your earth life. And soon you’ll have a name!” Then the Drop floated some funny box with a piece of paper, which the boys called a ship. Although the Drop knew for sure what real ships look like, she didn’t argue, because she liked boys’ voices and laughter very much. 
Then she mixed with clay and looked very unlike herself; by clinging to the bottom of homemade frigate she moved to somebody’s yard. There the frigate was thrown under the shrub and the Drop slowly slipped down into the grass…  she was half-dry and very slender. The Drop began to look for her source ," the sea, but it was nowhere to be seen. She was all alone… Panic pierced all her hydrogen-oxygen molecules. “Soon I’ll die with neither a name nor fame… No one will ever think of me! The Wind must have laughed at poor me!” the Drop cried, withering herself by sullen melancholy. 
A small dewdrop heard Drop’s anguish. “It’s vital to find a root - go into the ground!” it said in a silver voice. 
“Into the ground? Do you want to bury me? I am a light sea drop! I used to reflect the sun!”
“But to get a name you need to do something!” The Drop didn’t have time to argue, so she dived to look for a root.
Soon she heard that she was called a Rose. She didn’t understand if it was good or bad, but the name sounded frequently and was followed by invariable delight and adoration. “Good heavens! I’m Rose! That’s the name given to me!” she thought somehow embarrassed, when she remembered her hard lonely way from the very root to the graceful petal.

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

Brilliant Helen. This is a very imaginative and lovely piece of writing. Personifying a drop of water and telling us its adventures is a great idea. I think your story also lends itself to giving us an environmental message.
All the best,
Alan

[HelenZ]

Alan, thank you for reading, I am glad you enjoyed my story.))

[Chris]

Was a great translation to bring your "story" into view. BUT, it IS YOUR story and well told.

[HelenZ]

Chris, Thank you for your reading and review))

[thetish]

What a pleasure to read your work! I must read this one to my boys.

[HelenZ]

That would be nice!!)) tell me later about their reaction!