Yeah, I seriously can relate to every words you've just described. I, myself, am not a morning person, either. When you've said those lines; "I'm cold! It's wet, it's dark. Outside it's stark! Grey and uninviting" It reminded me of that camping trip I took when it was raining overnight and my "waterproof" tent was soaked with leftover of the rain... "waterproof" my a*s...
Anyway, it's pretty good tho and good morning to you, too...
I quite know how you feel, it's been like that in NY for days now! I especially like the urgency in the second verse: Good lord! I'm cold, it's wet, it's dark. Outside it's stark. Grey and uninviting. Think I'll go back to bed!
I think I shall too! Nice job, I enjoyed the lightheartedness in this piece, even if it's a bit gray. LOL
BTW: It's exactly THAT here this morning!
Laugh and the world laughs with you - cry and you cry alone!
What better incentive to see the humour in everything you do?
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