Spring Gently

A Poem by Heavenly Scent

Haiku for Melissa :)

Spring gently enters,

Flowers peeping through the soil,

Soft rain helps them grow.

© 2008 Heavenly Scent

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Rambling Prose

Very nice Haiku indeed! I too like the greens - to me it shows different states of life springing up from the earth as well as the many shades of color. Best of luck in the contest!

~nicely done~

Posted 16 Years Ago

Melissa

I enjoyed this showering of words in this Haiku! The color green represents Spring well. Loved it. The contest ends the 15th of June. I will be in touch. Thank you for entering the contest!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Poor Man's Poet

This is was well done, I like it.
its a nice visual piece.
thee only thing missing
was the heyfever that comes
with spring.

The Poor mans' Poet

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 15, 2008
Last Updated on May 16, 2008

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Heavenly Scent

Eastbourne, United Kingdom

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