You'll always hold a place in my heart.

“We met it seems, such a short time ago
You looked at me, needing me so. And I found out, I needed you too.
I remember how we used to play. I recall those rainy days.
The fires glowed, that kept us warm.
But now I see, we’re both alone.
Goodbye may seem forever. Farewell is like the end.
But in my hearts the memory, and there, you’ll always be.”

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I like it makes me think.

Deeply inbeded memories are like bones in you forever lol

[Felicity's Eve]

Very melancholy... But I see just a little ray of hope at the end. ^.^

I love the flow of this! :)

[Heather]

@Heathersmusings: Thanks! :) I really am glad you like it.

[Heather]

this is so beautiful, such tenderness expressed. It immediately made me smile and warmed my heart. I enjoyed every word but the ending was perfection.

[Kelsey]

I love this ending. very nice piece. (:

[melissa]

very good nice flow

[Westminster Abbey]

This is very good. The words flow with such grace. Nice write

[zainul]

Very pleasant feeling comes from reading this short piece.
No grudge,no complain,no revenge and no curse.
A decent love ends as a decent memory.
Adore you,Heather for the lovely poem.

[Heather]

@Kailer Mason: That's a great attitude!

[Heather]

@Kailer Mason: Well don't give up! Have faith.

[Kaylor Mason]

I won't give up. Don't worry :)