My mind is a tangled web.

My mind is a tangled web.

A Poem by HeatherWoodard

      In my mind, you will find
A tangled web of thoughts
Behind my eyes is a forbidden place
It holds the key to my heart

        Oh, behind my eyes,
  A forbidden place lies
 No one has ever been there.
In my mind there is no air,
Oh I cannot breathe, 
      Help me please
In my mind the sky is not blue
But it is red - the color of the thread
That ties my mind together

       Oh, my mind is so clever.
    It deceives me,
  It makes me believe
All the things I wish were true
It makes me believe
 That the sky really is blue.

Oh yes my mind is
a tangled web of thoughts.

© 2015 HeatherWoodard


Author's Note

HeatherWoodard
I don't really know what to say. The title says it all x3

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This is great, I'm sure many can relate.

Posted 9 Years Ago


HeatherWoodard

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!
A very good piece of writing... Love the line... 'Behind my eyes is a forbidden place... It holds the key to my heart
heart'.... On line 17... There's a typo error... We're is in place instead of were... Nice

Posted 9 Years Ago


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HeatherWoodard

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'll fix that :)

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