Very romantic, but I think you should add more visual imagery and locations. While reading it I was yearning for more. For instance, you could include visual imagery of the open ocean, enchanted forest, rainy terrain or jungle. These are just a few examples. I hope this helps.
Very romantic, but I think you should add more visual imagery and locations. While reading it I was yearning for more. For instance, you could include visual imagery of the open ocean, enchanted forest, rainy terrain or jungle. These are just a few examples. I hope this helps.