Just to see you smile

I want to see you smile
For you it's worth the while
I'd kill myself
Or run a thousand miles
Just to see you smile

Reviews

[lissalovesyou]

So sweet.
Thank you for entering it in my contest.
lissalovesyou:)

[Zahra]

This is a sweet piece, brief, simple but effective

[Nusquam Esse]

This is a surprisingly solid short poem, although I can't help but feel like getting the 3rd line to somehow rhyme with the rest might be a good idea. If nothing else, having 'running' as an option after 'killing' seems a bit off.

[WindsorWolf28]

Alright.
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