Within the Rain

As rainy day becomes rainy night
Drops stream down out of sight
Echoing the tears of missing you
Getting lost in the rhythm pulls me thru
Just like your soothing voice can do
Across the miles when I talk to you
We have our own rhythm too
Mesmerized by a love so true
The raindrops become you and I
Dancing within a saturated sky
Into blissful puddles we fall
Swirling in the meaning of it all
Remembering how we first fell
Secrets shared we shall never tell
One with you within the drops of rain
Until we find ourselves together again

©️Heather Hazlett
January 3, 2020

Reviews

[Chris]

Caring, with positive emotion and hope-full wishes.

[bee]

I really enjoyed your poem. It has a good flow. I just have one question: "Until we find ourselves to ni gether again". Isn't this supposed to read together? Or am I just not getting it?
Anyways, great poem!

[Heather Hazlett]

Thank you for your comments and for finding that typo for me! You were definitely right about what it was supposed to say!

[Curtis.Lenker]

Very good write here. Such pure emotion. I could feel every line. Good job.

[Heather Hazlett]

Such wonderful comments! Thank you very much!