that girl

Just a small nonsensical poem-like thing written on a whim.

That girl smiled a  wicked smile talking to me, "if i told you i saw god at the back of my head would you laugh at me?" she smiles her wicked smile.

i say no.

then she smiles again and kisses her painting of a dragon making love to a woman whose shoulder is half-eaten and whose bones are red with her blood and her hair.

and i ask about that painting.

again she smiles a smile dipped in orange paint tipped with black

"it may be my own sense of beauty

or it may be that i'm bad with a brush."

then she takes off her blouse and 

leaps out of the window

Author's Note

Capitalization is absent under creative license.

Reviews

[Vanna Renee]

Very very interesting.
It's very good though, in a different sort of way.
I love the edge of this.
And thank you for adding that capitalization is absent under creative license(:
I admire that.
So few do it that it's almost like a signature style whenever they do.
Good work new writer(:
Keep it up

[Shellie]

Ha, i love it. The last line was great. Unexpected. But funny coz it was so unexpected and you know what i love the eccentricity behind this and also the image of the dragon making love to the woman and the blood etc its so unique on its own. well done. must keep this!

[Revenge<3'sMe]

Very good :) I cant write poems to save my life so i envy u! lol jk but very nice :)

[Heartswell.]

Thank you so much for the concrit, love. ^_^