Until

This is about how I had strong feelings for a guy and I didn't really know, until I stopped talking to him and left him alone.

You used to mean nothing to me, until you laid  my eyes on me.

I wasn’t feeling it at first, until you twisted our hands together.

I didn’t care for you, until you showed me you cared about me.

I couldn’t miss you, until I was away from you for a week.

I didn’t know I loved you, until you left for good.

Reviews

[ANTO]

They led the way - made all the first moves and then left like a tornado, with a wreckage behind.
The longing for a former lover is usually made more intense by our repainting of the affair as a perfect example - never again to be experienced and having done that enough times we convince ourselves the new memory of it all was the real one.

The last line is a knockout in a flurry of combinations and jabs. Very enjoyable.

[Heartful5160]

Thank you very much. You should get to check out I'm Just Color Blinded! Then really tell me what you think about that one.

[ANTO]

okay heartful, I will , thank you and you;re welcome! :)

[Vaibhav Singh Thakur]

Simple words deciphering sophisticated meaning.
Can't stop speculating about the feelings aroused by these lines.

[Heartful5160]

Thank you so much. Again, I try to simplyfy words and my meanings down, because I just have so many feelings I would like to write about, o I write about them in different stories.But thank you for the review.

[Vaibhav Singh Thakur]

You are welcome. Keep rocking :-)

[Heartful5160]

I sure will.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Aww. I like it! It has deep a meaning. I really like your writing style!
Keep it up!
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Heartful5160]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Your welcome!

[realmwriter]

Sometimes you don't know what you have or haven't until it's gone. Very well said.

[Heartful5160]

Very true on that comment.

[Arsh]

Yeah, most of the times, we ain't know.. what it's actually 'bout. Is it 'bout love or just 'bout the strong fire of infatuation? It happens to every soul wandering around the world. I'm glad to read something true from a creative writer. Keep it up!

[Heartful5160]

Thanks it's just all from experiance! Makes good pieces of art.

[Arsh]

Your welcome.
Yeah, And, your art speaks through the magnificence of your words nicely. I'd be looking forward to reading your stuffs!

[Heartful5160]

Thanks. Yeah, it wouldn't hurt to check out my work. I try to write things that people can get material and words out of. Try to change the world with what I write.

[Arsh]

Yeah, even I believe... the things a writer writes through the brilliancy of his words're meant to be kept stored into the heart & shan't be forget. In fine, when the life's failed to teach us a lesson of world, the "words" make it done peacefully. Right?

[Heartful5160]

Right. 100% agree. You should check out my piece on being color blind. I would say that's my best

[Arsh]

Thanks for being a great supporter. Of course, i'd like to check out your stuffs, Umm... it's a story or a poem? (Mind if may I ask?)

[Heartful5160]

Well, it's more like a essay or article. It's a really strong piece and I put my mind and heart into it a whole lot.

[Arsh]

Oh... sometimes, I love enjoying articles. Even the articles too have got their own worth in the world for impacting the life. You say with so confidence that you've put your creative mind and a beautiful heart into it a whole lot so, I must read that write 'right-now'.

[Heartful5160]

haha. I like what u did with that.

[Arsh]

Lol. Pleasure to me.

[Heartful5160]

lol. funny

[Gee]

Sweet.Really liked last line.

[Heartful5160]

Thanks. Actually, I wrote this because I realized it.

[Gee]

Ah well,many more pebbles.....

[Heartful5160]

I don't know what that means.

[Gee]

Imagine him as one pebble on a beach strewn with them.So many choices.

[Heartful5160]

Okay. Now, it makes more sense.

[Gee]

Glad to be of assistance,and now to include that in one of your poems!

[Heartful5160]

Hah'. not a bad idea